Using The Five Senses In Your Story
Sight and sound are often used to bring a scene to life and for impacting upon the tone of a story. But the senses of smell, touch and taste can also affect a story’s mood. A rundown cafe might smell like a mixture of sweaty training shoes and over-fried chips. The menu may be caked in sticky sauce and clammy mashed potato. The tea might taste like stagnant water.
Your readers will be able to imagine themselves there, smelling the vile scents, feeling the congealed food on the menu and tasting the liquid being passed off as tea.
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Thank you so much, Patty 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
I try to bring in all the sense, Esther. Some are harder than others.
They certainly are, but that’s great that you try and bring them all to your writing 🙂